Beth, hmmm. Well, what do I REALLY think? I think this is weird and beautiful. Know the style is Bossa, but your melody lines take this into another genre, but not one I know. The lyrics are mysterious yet stuffed with intriguing inuendo that give the listener a sideways glance at the situation. LOVE your vocals on this (and everything else). A really enjoyable listen.

FWIW, some of the sung lyrics are different from the posted ones. For example, this verse is sung with lyrics that end as "words" and "birds" instead of "same" and "flame":

If only he’d say that
He felt the same
He’d send her off
In the sky like a flame

FWIW #2, in the 2nd sentence of your post, you may wish to substitute "knew" and "lo".


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