Good version..... I like the groove in the rocking parts.

2 nits, if you will....the one word "planted" sounds a bit unnatural. And the vocals overall, have a distortion that has removed the crispness from the high end. Almost like a tad too much saturation on the vocals.

Giving the vox more top end air would really open up the mix and give it a feeling of space.

Really good work overall.

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