Originally Posted by musician17
This is phenomenal. Phenomenal, even for your always high standard. One of your very best.

Had tears in my eyes at the story, and the twist in the last verse took me completely by surprise. Superbly written, and you deliver it so, so well. It's been a while since I've heard an up-tempo song from you, and boy was it worth the wait. How do you do it? Wow. BRAVO.

James - thanks for your continued support..

Originally Posted by B.D.Thomas
There's nothing to add that hasn't already been said, except that I like the part best where the banjo goes and the electric kicks in, for two reasons grin

What really amazes me is that when I read the lyrics, it's like we meet in a pub down the street, I ask “How are you?” and you casually tell this story that just happens to rhyme and fit a song.
It's all so natural.
BIG kudos!

Thanks, B. D.
That is actually a perfect description of what songwriting ought to be. A meaningful conversation. Casual, natural.