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Okay, this was really just for fun. I had these lyrics from literally eons ago and I never really new what style of song would fit, so I played with a Bossa and low and behold it worked. So, I can put this to rest and move on now. I'd love to hear what you (really) think... https://soundcloud.com/divinemetime/opium-tearsStyle is _B140_GB.STY (Contemporary Med Bossa) RealTracks in style: ~464:Bass, Acoustic, Bossa Ev 140 RealTracks in song: ~773:Piano, Acoustic, Rhythm Jazz Sw 110 ('B' Only) RealTracks in style: ~467:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm Bossa Ev 140 Loop in Song: World\Latin - boss120a_rim_brush_kick9 drums ev8.wav Loop in Song: Percussion Loops\Loop124bpm Guiro 8ths 4 bars.wma RealDrums in style:BossaBrushes: a: Sidestick Brushes b: Sidestick, Ride In addition to main vocals with dynamics and reverb and an upper harmony, I used a 6ths harmony from the box (just lazy!). I also added another Loop: Drum n Bass\Jungle Darkcore_165_c drums ev 16. wav Opium Tears Reflected in mirrors And dreams lie her fears Relying on someone Who doesn’t have time Inspired, affected While he draws the line Swimming in oceans Sweeping away A day in the life A life in one day She’s rehearsed her outburst with nothing to defend She’s screaming and he’s held her or so she’d pretend But truth be known she’s frightened And the tears are stuck inside So she’s waiting out the force of the doubt So she can push the feelings aside Further she falls She opens her eyes She crawls Into disguise Falling away and Losing all touch Sunshine and madness It doesn’t take much If only he’d say that He felt the same He’d send her off In the sky like a flame She’s rehearsed her outburst with nothing to defend She’s screaming and he’s held her or so she’d pretend But truth be known she’s frightened And the tears are stuck inside So she’s waiting out the force of the pull So she can push the feelings aside In his embrace It's his smile she feels within her own face The Empress card is drawn It tells no lies Just like the Lovers She will learn to fly Way past the pyramid And out to the sun Her heart on fire With everything one
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Beth, hmmm. Well, what do I REALLY think? I think this is weird and beautiful. Know the style is Bossa, but your melody lines take this into another genre, but not one I know. The lyrics are mysterious yet stuffed with intriguing inuendo that give the listener a sideways glance at the situation. LOVE your vocals on this (and everything else). A really enjoyable listen.
FWIW, some of the sung lyrics are different from the posted ones. For example, this verse is sung with lyrics that end as "words" and "birds" instead of "same" and "flame":
If only he’d say that
He felt the same
He’d send her off
In the sky like a flame
FWIW #2, in the 2nd sentence of your post, you may wish to substitute "knew" and "lo".
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When it's done for fun you can't argue with that.
It has a nice latin feel to it
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Thanks Ron. "Weird and beautiful". I'll take that. Thanks also for the lyric and spell check. That happens when I'm not paying attention.
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Definitely different!
And fun too, I enjoyed the listen.
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Bonjour
Je partage les commentaires de DC Ron, c'est un peu inclassable comme style. C'est peut être le mélange bossa, d'un piano swing et d'un chant qui survole la rythmique.
C'est bien d'avoir un style original et personnel. Alors Bravo!
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Thanks, Blue Attitude and Merci, Laurent!
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Beth, I really think that this is your best to date.
Outstanding vocal and lyrics, loved those lyrics.
Great backing band and mix.
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Hello, Bring Your Own Tilted Halo Band, Beth. Creativity drips from everything your do. Love this. Great vocals, and I really dig that upright bass. Lyrics are so good. Man, I really like the subtle background music. Excellent choices, and a pleasing mix. Okay, here's more of what I REALLY think: You are a wonderfully gifted creative individual that I am glad is living on the planet as the same time I am --and one who is sharing her just-for-fun creations. I think therefore we are.
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Beth,
Very creative lyric. Great vocal and a good mix. I really like the band here as well.
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Aren't you sweet! Thanks, Mario.
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Hello Bass-Playin' - Songwritin' - Singing Babu Song Magician! I am overwhelmed with your comment! Them's some super nice things to say. Thank you. 🙏
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Hi Bob,
Thanks for giving it a listen and for your kindness!
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Excellent song with great instrumentation and mix. Lyrically it's another one I relate to, theme-wise.
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I can imagine a small club, open mic night and this one performed on stage. And I would enjoy every moment of it forgetting all the talking around. Reminded me of Norah Jones.
Unique poetic lyrics. Beautiful melody, the chorus is especially nice. And the band supports your pleasant voice perfectly, the humming in the end is lovely. Mix is in balance. Very creative work!
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Very kind words. Thank you, Janne.
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Intriguing title!
I like the rhythm of the lyrics as it complements the bossa rhythm. That and the unexpected turns in the melody make this an engaging song.
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EXCELLENT song, fabulous arrangement.
I like, like, like it.
I'm not fussed on the title but that's your call.
My only nit is that, fairly often, you vocal fades on the last note of a line.
Some of those could be bolstered while others make a good affect/affectation for the message.
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