Originally Posted by Guitarhacker
Good version..... I like the groove in the rocking parts.

2 nits, if you will....the one word "planted" sounds a bit unnatural. And the vocals overall, have a distortion that has removed the crispness from the high end. Almost like a tad too much saturation on the vocals.

Giving the vox more top end air would really open up the mix and give it a feeling of space.

Really good work overall.
Thanks, Herb, especially for your detailed feedback.
I just checked a couple pronunciation websites to see what you mean. I think(?) my pronunciation is “plannted” and should be “planted”.
Easy to fix.
If the distortion you're referring to occurs on Paul's vocals, it's intentional, because it didn't cut through in the louder passages without it, at least not the way a simple EQ did.
Art's part is pretty clean (unlike the original).

Thank you again for taking the time to listen and comment.
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