EXCELLENT song, fabulous arrangement.
I like, like, like it.
I'm not fussed on the title but that's your call.
My only nit is that, fairly often, you vocal fades on the last note of a line.
Some of those could be bolstered while others make a good affect/affectation for the message.


Cheers
rayc
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