Hi Brad,

I've been away from the forum for several weeks due to my wife's heart attack. She's home and relatively stable. I'm trying to do a little catching up. I'm glad to have come across this one.

Yeah, it's bit busy, but everyone has their own thoughts about putting a song together. The only two things I would suggest if you decide to revisit this, are: 1. The vocal is too far in front of the band for a rock song. 2. I think the fiddle is a bit out of place.

Excellent lyric and song concept. I think a little more high EQ on the drums would help a bit, in addition to what I said above. Great message and a hard driving sound.

Di and I wish the best for your family health issues. And thanks for a touching background narrative. Keep posting, and I'll keep listening.

Alan

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