Dua Lipa isn't exactly what floats my boat, but here are a few simple things you can change:

  • Get rid of the 80s snare sound in the verses. Most modern snare-sounds are short, not too bright and often overlaid with handclaps. Your choruses sound much more modern than the verses
  • Modern productions use a lot of vocal layering to make the sound smooth yet cutting through. Unfortunately, often with auto-tune where an EQ on one of the layers would have done the job.


Overall, I think you did a good job, it sounds modern and is absolutely danceable.
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