Originally Posted by B.D.Thomas
Beautiful song, and I like the softness of your vocals.
Very well sung, and very well played.
And, of course, a killer outro smile

Good thing we'll never know when it's our last...
Thanks, Brain. I know some folks who would rather know (or so they...)

Originally Posted by PeterF
Marty

Excellent listen, really well constructed song, nice, bass and vocal.
The ending was

Peter
Hi, Peter. Thanks so much for your nice

Originally Posted by dcuny
Hi, Marty.

An upbeat approach to a downbeat topic. Your vocals carry the tune the song, with cheerful backing.

Clever ending! smile
Thanks, David. Gotta know where that downbeat is. smile The backing band and I (especially me) were trying to convey the happiness of life rather than the sadness of departure.

Originally Posted by Ezekiel's Storm
That first verse had a 50s/early 60s feel and transform nicely into a folksy sound. You created a nice melody here. I like the down home feel of the song. Neat ending too.
Thanks, Scott. Stay tuned. At the end of this one I did another called My Old Country with a nod to what it was like growing up in the 50s and 60s.


Enjoy whatever happens!
marty

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