Originally Posted by BYOBand
You made me log in! I love this. The melody is unexpected. Vocals and band sound great. Really nice build.

Thanks, Beth, so glad you enjoyed the tune! The lyrical waves of confusion, regret and hope were fun to score. Still a heartbreaking sentiment to work with...

FWIW, glad to have given you an excuse to log in, but you should really do that all the time so that the forum can show you which posts you've visited and/or replied to. I know I can't keep it straight otherwise! frown

Originally Posted by vicarn
Excellent mix, vocal and well written, DC.
Call me picky but you may want to revisit the phrasing on "Haunted by" in verse 1.
e.g:
Haunted (space) by past occasions or Haunted by (space) past occasions .
Not a big deal though.

Vic

Vic, THANKS for the listen and nice review. Tried the phrasing you mentioned both ways, but decided your 2nd alternative (the one I used) fit the rhythm of the lyrics slightly better. But I can see it either way. Appreciate the notes!


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