Hi, Ray.

Catchy song! Too bad the vocal is buried in the mix.

I'm going to strongly disagree with the idea that the instruments sell the song. It's the vocals.

While your singing isn't where you want it to be, for this song, it's perfect.

No doubt you have an idea in your head of what the vocal should sound like, and are judging it based on that. But none of us are approaching the song with that notion.

This song doesn't need someone with a wide range to deliver it - it needs attitude, which you deliver in spades. laugh

-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?