The vocal is ace...it does need a little taming in a few spots where it gets loud, has some essing & seems to clip, but the tone, attitude and all is ace.
Not fussed on the line that includes "hoes & bimbos" - it seems to bring the song down a little.
The general narrative is good and suits the sardonic tone.
Fab arrangement, cool work.
A, primarily, a bassist I don't play the blues or jam at all - the expectations of a bassist are always unedifying.


Cheers
rayc
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