Originally Posted by BlueAttitude
Very clever write, Marty, no surprise there!

Fun stuff, enjoyed the video too.
Thanks, Dave. You can easily see why I didn't beg you to play this one when you look at the ditty chords. Although I know you somehow would've made the song so much better, you probably would've avoided me afterwards. laugh

Originally Posted by DC Ron
Marty, super song, funny and arguably true. LOVE your vocals on tis one, and that bass is really solid. Inventive arrangement, and that spoken word part to kick off the middle eight is hilarious. Really nice arrangement and mix, though you MIGHT pan the guitar off center a touch more to give the vocal more space. Great job (again)!!!
Thanks, Ron. Just an irreverant mix of the same story likely played out so many times for over a 100 years. Thanks for mentioning the bass, too. My favorite line was from the AR guy was when he realized Joe's song was crap.

Originally Posted by rayc
Hug music again...excellent...the bass rolls and rolls and rolls.
The vocal - as alway luxurious.
The narrative - you do these amusing, homily twist based things OH so well.
Hi, Ray. Hug music? Ha never heard that one. Sounds like a genre for holding her close without the insentive to move passed first base. Thanks, Ray.

Originally Posted by B.D.Thomas
Even after listening to it for the third time, it still makes me smile.
Love it!
Thanks, Brain --and you're welcome. As long as the music moves ya...


Enjoy whatever happens!
marty

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