Hi Scott.

Kudos to you on writing, arranging, performing and producing such a great song.
It sounds as professional anything I've heard.
There were a couple of things that really appealed to me.
One... The use of list items based on "when" lyrics was a stroke of genius smile
Two... I'm a huge fan of AABA format and I love the way you've used the asymmetry of the AAAX rhyme scheme.
I really enjoyed listening to this a great deal.

--Noel


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