Originally Posted by DC Ron
Scott, super song, really well sung. Nice choices on the band. The solo guitar and drums are especially nice. Cool when the soloist sounds like he's actually listening to the song.

Sadness is part of life, though thankfully not the only part. So I think sad songs are better than fine, and like this one a lot. smile
Thanks, Ron. I did a lot of solo generation until I got the part that I wanted.
Originally Posted by WaoBand
Love the instrumentation in this, particularly the guitars and the toms.
Thanks, Wao!

Originally Posted by Noel96
Hi Scott.

Kudos to you on writing, arranging, performing and producing such a great song.
It sounds as professional anything I've heard.
There were a couple of things that really appealed to me.
One... The use of list items based on "when" lyrics was a stroke of genius smile
Two... I'm a huge fan of AABA format and I love the way you've used the asymmetry of the AAAX rhyme scheme.
I really enjoyed listening to this a great deal.

--Noel
Noel, thank you for the comments and the lyric format analysis.
Originally Posted by Deej56
Ezekiel:

Not much of a song??? Geez; sounds like a song to me. Big sounds, stellar vocal, deep write, and great production touches. Certainly NOT a nothing to see here song . . . very much a must listen. Liked it from start to finish. Excellent!!

Deej
thank you bery much, Deej!

Originally Posted by vicarn
Excellent lyric and arrangement.
I would think a harmony would go well with the "She Runs Away" part and give it more emphasis.

Vic
Thanks, Vic. I had harmony on the part you suggested and also on the third line of each verse; however, I didn't like my vocal, so I rerecorded it (as you hear it now) and never got back to the harmony. I will probably go back and add it plus re-sing some of the parts that I am still not happy with.