Originally Posted by Deej56
Noel,

I love this tune . . . so, so sweet. You’ve done a great job with the AI vocal . . . but what really gets me is that melody accompanied by those beautiful lyrics (“twinkling like fireflies as though it’s us they celebrate” . . . brilliant!).

Dang, this is really, really good! Wonderfully done!

My humble regards to you,

Deej
Hi Deej.

It's good to see you. Thank you for the smile that you gave me when I read through your comments. Thanks, too, for mentioning the 'fireflies' line. While verse one was a reproduction of Elizabeth Barrett Browning's first four lines of the sonnet, verse two and beyond was based on using her ideas and thoughts to stir my imagination and to create lyrics that, hopefully, resonated with the overall character of the poem. Interestingly, it was her first four lines that also set the ABBA rhyme scheme that I used (although my BB rhyme occurred more as an internal rhyme in my lyrics).

I appreciate your visit. Thanks again.
--Noel

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