Just reading the credits I knew you put a lot of work into this. It turned out nicely in the end.

I totally get that back and forth thing..... render out what you think is "the" vocal take and then you notice something that starts sounding a bit off, perhaps awkward..... back to the drawing board and repeat the process..... but it is worth picking the nits almost every time.

This has an innocent, almost bluegrass, folksy kind of swing to it.... I liked it.

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