Hi, Elliot.

A strong pop song! Catchy, with excellent harmonies on the vocals. The arrangement sounds great.

I'm assuming that this is a hybrid of Suno and BiaB. It's got the same sort of "list" elements that AI likes to generate, but oddly you've got two lines that are incomplete:

   When I saw your face By the lights on the Christmas tree
   I knew that the night ???

   I know I will never erase that sweet memory
   I knew that it right ???
   One Christmas Night
   I will never forget

You're an excellent songwriter, so I'm having difficulty imagining how this would happen if you wrote the lyrics yourself.

You've listed BiaB elements, but there are some parts of the arrangement - like the keys - that you haven't listed. Since you didn't mention playing them, I'm assuming you pulled them from the Suno stems. Whatever the origin, they sound excellent.

The vocals are SynthV, but I'm assuming you imported them from Suno vocal stems, partly because at 2:09 Natalie sings "kwis-miss" instead of "Christmas". Mistaking a liquid consonant /r/ for a /w/ is the sort of error a phoneme recognizer would make, and again, I'm having difficulty imagining that coming from mis-typing "Christmas".

I'm not complaining about you possibly using AI. It just would be nice to know the workflow behind the song, that's all.

Thanks! smile

-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?