Nice and bouncy! You selected really good BIAB elements and knifed them together nicely. I especially liked the ending. The only suggestion I would make is that the bridge, starting with “But I’m concerned” seems crowded with melody notes and words…that’s a contrast with how smooth-flowing the mainline is…seemed kind of choppy. I’d recommend seeing if you could pare down each line by a syllable or two to get it to breeze smoothly through that section. Glad I decided to listen!


Windows 11, Intel Core i5-8600T 2.3Ghz, 16 gig ram, BIAB 2025 MegaPak, SampleTank 4, Keystation49 Kybd, Neewer NW-800 mic