Thank you Andi for taking the time to listen, analyse and comment.

For rock music I like to stop by your Soundcloud profile ;-)

Cool , thankyou

Maybe you experimented a little too much with BiaB within the song.
A clearer song line would have been the better way for me

This is exactly the kind of refreshing feedback which is very helpful going forward.
Listening now I fully agree and I blame the "silly season" for ignoring my own "less is more" philosophy smile
Thanks again Andi, your input is much valued!!!