Bob, that's an excellent piece, I really enjoyed it!
After I replayed it a couple of times I began to wonder if the delicate intro would sound nice repeated at the end also? The solo intro is nice and poignant (memories, lost love, etc. etc), then the song builds nicely with the theme backed up with drums, bass, etc. and in my head I was hearing it at the end go back to the poignancy of the lonely intro, maybe with more reverb as it wanders off.... Just a thought. (Nurse! he's out of bed again...

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Can you tell me what gizmos and software you use to get your masters so bright, sparkly, punchy and loud?

John