Hi Izzy,

I think I heard severall versions of your vocals, all very interesting!
But this latest version of your vocal capabilities is (to my opinion) the best one.

The lyrics are huge. I like the line "We are the dreamers who carry the flame". But also creative. Never heard anyone sing like this about Woodstock.
And the variety in instruments in your song works out very good. Especially the rhythm change (synth?) after the words "O, we wander...etc" !!!

I agree (a bit) with TuneMonger on what he said about the flowing of the words, and sing a bit less.
But that's a minor point. I do think though, you could've used some more reverb on the vocals.

I never was at Woodstock, too young and out of money. Beside that, I found out I don't really like mass gatherings.
Enjoy the compliments on this song, Izzy. You earned them!

Hans


Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130