Hi, B.D.
Nice title, good lyrics, well executed song.
The vocals on the verses are too far back for my preference. Then again, I probably put my vocals too up front, so...
Other than that, I've only got good things to say about the song.
And after hearing the piano, I'll have to disagree about the "not a proper musician".
Excellent.

Thank you for your comment and your always constructive feedback, David.
I assume that by “up front” you mean drier vocals, not just louder.
Based on your feedback, I tried it out, but it didn't work to my liking.
I guess the emptiness that my singer feels needs this space in order to be perceived by the listener.
But it was worth a try, so thank you for your suggestion.
Much appreciated
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