This was my previous song project and one I've had a lot of trouble with since the beginning.

I decided to revisit it with some new panning and level changes as well as a mandolin solo instead of the fiddle, also tried a rather drastic (for me anyway) EQ setting on the master. I would appreciate any feedback on the results.

All tracks are RT's. All vocals, guitar solo & some background guitar are me.
It's really nice to be able to get some feedback from so many varied artists & fellow users of these programs.
Thanks in advance,
Greg
http://www.mymusicstream.com/gregachord/song-8407385772636.htmlwords below
BE MY LADY
I DREAM OF YOU WITH YOUR PRETTY BLUE EYES AND THE WAY THEY LIGHT UP WHEN YOU SMILE
YOUR A LADY IN THE TRUEST SENSE OF THE WORD WITH CLASS AND STYLE
YOU MAKE MY HEART GO WILD WITH DESIRE AT THE MERE THOUGHT OF YOU
AND YOU BRING BACK FEELINGS OF LOVE THAT I ONCE KNEW
SO WOULD YOU BE MY LADY FOR AWHILE / WOULD YOU CHEER MY LIFE UP DARLIN
WITH YOUR BEAUTIFUL SMILE
AND WOULD YOU BE MY LOVER AND MY FRIEND / FOR I NEED SOMEONE MY GIRL
SO MY BROKEN HEART WILL MEND
I SEE YOU STANDING ALONE IN THE WORLD AND YOU STAND MIGHTY TALL
BUT I'D LIKE TO BE BY YOUR SIDE TO CATCH YOU IF YOU FALL
WE BOTH KNOW YOU'VE BEEN HURT BEFORE AND YOUR HEART FEELS THE PAIN
THE PAIN OF A LOVE THAT WAS LOST BUT MY LOVE STILL REMAINS
SO WOULD YOU BE MY LADY FOR AWHILE / WOULD YOU CHEER MY LIFE UP DARLIN
WITH YOUR BEAUTIFUL SMILE
AND WOULD YOU BE MY LOVER AND MY FRIEND / FOR I NEED SOMEONE MY GIRL
SO MY BROKEN HEART WILL MEND
(RIDE)
WOULD YOU BE MY LADY FOR AWHILE / WOULD YOU CHEER MY LIFE UP DARLIN
WITH YOUR BEAUTIFUL SMILE
AND WOULD YOU BE MY LOVER AND MY FRIEND / FOR I NEED SOMEONE MY GIRL
SO MY BROKEN HEART WILL MEND