I listened to this last night Greg- around 4am. I have some thoughts but I must run for now. I'll check back in later. In short, the tune is very good. I think the hook is very good with great harmonies to support it. I hear some questionable compression going on that overall, makes the track sound compressed a bit too much. But I'd have to listen again later. But I think this is great work! And I sympathise with trying to get a handle on things. If it were easy, EVERYONE would be great at it! Catch you later.

Dan