Originally Posted by Noel96
Hi BD.

What an absolutely stunning song in EVERY possible way.
I totally disagree with your assessment of yourself as someone who is "not a proper musician".
What I heard was a song created by someone who stands head and shoulders above many musicians.
I really, really liked the AXXA rhyme scheme in the verses. The feeling of open-endedness that this created was powerful.
It's easy to hear that a lot of thought and planning has gone into creating this masterpiece.

What an amazing musical journey!
--Noel
Thanks Noel - I always blush a little when I read your comments.
I really LOVE that you always explain why you like something, it helps a lot for future songs.
AXXA indeed works well for this song, and it's one of my favorite rhyme schemes anyway because I'm not a fan of too much rhyming.
And there are two lines where you don't have to find a rhyme cool
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I totally disagree with your assessment of yourself as someone who is "not a proper musician".
A proper musician can play live - I can't cry