James, of the two versions, I liked the acoustic better. The chorus is really well-designed, with an excellent lyric and melody line…I felt that is the strongest element. In my opinion, the rest is unnecessarily over complicated. I think you could simplify it so that the chorus really stands out..that’s what I would do.


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