Mario, ha! Well, once again you're surfing the undertow lyrically. Nicely played.

And the playing here is very nice indeed. Your MIDI controller work is ace as always, but I really like your lead guitar on this. Your instrument choices are super nice, as is the slap/reverb on your vocals. Funny and original, and a fitting sequel to your equally adventurous "Girlfriend".

Might be my ears (and my ears ARE a problem) but the bass and organ sometimes sound a touch too loud, or maybe the vocals are a little too soft. Also, the ending might decay naturally a bit more before cutting off. Just a thought. On the other hand, it all might be perfectly fine. Dang this growing old stuff...

Enjoyed your song!

Last edited by DC Ron; 02/09/25 05:52 PM.

DC Ron
BiaB Audiophile
Presonus Studio One
StudioCat DAW dual screen
Presonus Faderport 16
Too many guitars (is that a thing?)