Originally Posted by DC Ron
Mario, ha! Well, once again you're surfing the undertow lyrically. Nicely played.

And the playing here is very nice indeed. Your MIDI controller work is ace as always, but I really like your lead guitar on this. Your instrument choices are super nice, as is the slap/reverb on your vocals. Funny and original, and a fitting sequel to your equally adventurous "Girlfriend".

Might be my ears (and my ears ARE a problem) but the bass and organ sometimes sound a touch too loud, or maybe the vocals are a little too soft. Also, the ending might decay naturally a bit more before cutting off. Just a thought. On the other hand, it all might be perfectly fine. Dang this growing old stuff...

Enjoyed your song!

Thanx for this fantastic review Ron. I'll have to take a look at that volume issue.


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