I won’t repeat all the positives that others have posted..I had to research your main character to find out if it was a pure invention on your part, but I see it’s an existing fictional character..your idea, about creating a “4-min movie”—what a great framework for starting your creative work—I think that is absolutely a legit way to trigger your writing! in light of that objective, I’d say you are very successful—in all aspects—-style, delivery, lyric, feel—it all fed into the “script” of your little film. Excellent example of how a songwriter tells a complete story in the timespan of a few minutes. Well done!!

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