Really enjoyed the lyric—the rhyme scheme as well as the story. Loved the core idea of the story—I felt that each line supported the main idea perfectly. Also, the production didn’t get in the way of the vocal, and I liked how the higher register singing served to emphasize the “second time around” of the chorus. All around a great track, so glad I decided to listen.


Windows 11, Intel Core i5-8600T 2.3Ghz, 16 gig ram, BIAB 2025 MegaPak, SampleTank 4, Keystation49 Kybd, Neewer NW-800 mic