Originally Posted by firesong
"I wrote this song 45 years ago. I still consider it one of the best lyrics I've written." I can see why you would...this is a lyrical masterpiece IMHO...love the passion and the angst...the piano you used was very realistic...only took me forty years to learn to play almost that good...sooooo \good!

I very much appreciate these comments, Dan.


Originally Posted by rayc
The melody, arrangement, comitment and narrative have a lot in common with At 17 era Janis Ian...a really cool thing in my ears.
Stellar.
Piano, bass n vocals - you own it.

That means a lot to me, ray. thanks
Janis Ian deserved a LOT more attention. One of the finest songwriters ever.
Appreciate the mention on piano and bass...

Originally Posted by Ezekiel's Storm
Poignant lyrics. Yes, one of your tops. No need for an RT. Your piano is so emotive. I can see some established female singer performing this piece. I'm going back now for another listen.

Thanks so much. Scott...

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