Originally Posted by Tano Music
Really enjoyed the lyric—the rhyme scheme as well as the story. Loved the core idea of the story—I felt that each line supported the main idea perfectly. Also, the production didn’t get in the way of the vocal, and I liked how the higher register singing served to emphasize the “second time around” of the chorus. All around a great track, so glad I decided to listen.
Thanks Tano! As I said the lyrics actually evolved from more of a kid's song with unicorns and stuff but it morphed into a straightforward love song. I've heard differing opinions on the direction of the lyrics in the bridge but I chose not to second-guess myself and left them as is.
I truly appreciate the input!
WSS

Last edited by Westside Steve; 02/24/25 08:57 AM.