Ditto all the positive comments..I esp liked your use of the 2-syllable rhyme words—flowin/heaven, longer/over—all words that have the strong emphasis on the front syllable, then the weak-emphasis syllable following. You don’t hear it that often, and I think it keys the listener to ask “Now how is he going to rhyme THAT word?”, and keeps you engaged throughout. Great work!


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