Shigeki..I listened to both versions. You are a master architect! I appreciated the 3-note motif at the end of your phrases, repeated against different harmonies. While I didn’t understand the singing, it’s clear that you gave the lyricist a very accommodating structure to work with, and an excellent result emerged. Each time I listen, I hear how you are honoring the great tradition of song craftsmanship. This was both a pleasure and a lesson for me!


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