Hi Janne,

As many before me, I liked your mix with East and West culture/instruments a lot.
I agree it matched in a very good way. So your song is a very good song indeed!

About the singing of the ladies;
The thing that came to me was she hardly breathed while singing (I know AI-vocals don't need that, but if you humanize them I think you have to be aware of that.
The lines she sing were very long, f.i. take that first verse: (Your blue eyes in the colors of my sky dome, scattered rays of sunlight all over my home,
the laughter in your wordplay was the star dust on the windowpanes. I miss that glittering when it rains). She sang that without audible breathing, or?

But beside that, your lyrics are so good, as they always are, like your melody and the instruments you use. I think I said it before, but this is a real Popfinger song.

Hans

Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130