Hi Tom,

Great inspiration for the really nice song. You have a very pleasant, soft but engaging voice.

The background vocals on the chorus are nicely done. The false ending almost made me click off as it was a bit long.

The only suggestion I have is to bring the bass line up I think it would help to carry the song.

Great message! Nice song, Tom!

Alan


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