Originally Posted by B.D.Thomas
Nice song, with beautiful harmonies that aren't always perfect, but certainly serve their purpose.
The overlapping vocals are a nice idea, but it is indeed hard to follow the main vocals, I would reconsider.
Call/response would probably be easier to understand and more pleasant to the ears.

But all in all, it's quite an interesting song that's worth fine-tuning.

I agree. I did have a hard time following the lead myself.
I also thing this is a diamond in the rough and with a little polish it would be brilliant.


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