Hi nDav id,

i think it's a great song but needs a touch more polish. An earlier poster. suggested a call and response with the vocals. I, too, think that would be a choice to consider.
On the backing tracks part, I think you're fine as is. Just the vocals need another glance or two.

I used to bowl on Wednesday evenings until Di's health took the recent downward turn. Most of the people there know I create music and write novels. A couple of them asked me when I knew I was finished with a novel or a song. I told them: "When I get sick and tired of rewriting it".

Anyway, I think you have a really good project to tinker with as you see fit. It doesn't need much - as little spit and polish here and there.

Alan

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