Jazz-lite indeed. Hey, those lyrics you threw at it are perfect --AND have substance, David. The vocals are so well done. Man, you are so good at that intricate stuff. Know what you mean about being backed into a corner with lyrics. Glad you stuck with this. Hey, Hamilton will give you a precedence to quote to the rhyme police; they rhymed subject with subject four times in the same line.

Third listen now... The opening reminds me of Beatles. Dang, I can imagine writing all of those intricate harmony lines, and you say you cut back some. Haha. That's why I'm on my 3rd spin. This is totally brilliant, David. Please don't rely on your kids to know what's good enough. Yeah, I love this one, David.


Enjoy whatever happens!
marty

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