Hi, B.D.
Nice song, with beautiful harmonies that aren't always perfect, but certainly serve their purpose.
Thanks! They serve their purpose, but I'm not sure they serve the song.
The overlapping vocals are a nice idea, but it is indeed hard to follow the main vocals, I would reconsider.
I've gone back and brought down the vocals, dropped a few, and used TrackSpacer so the melody would dominate. It probably still needs a lot more pruning.
Call/response would probably be easier to understand and more pleasant to the ears.
Oh, 100%. Typically, there's room for that. The vocals were shoehorned in after the fact, and it shows.
But all in all, it's quite an interesting song that's worth fine-tuning.
Thanks! I'll consider doing a remix.