Hi, Alan.

Originally Posted by Al-David
i think it's a great song but needs a touch more polish. An earlier poster. suggested a call and response with the vocals.
If there were room - and those bits added enough value - I'd do that.

As it is, I've tried to remove the main issues.

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I used to bowl on Wednesday evenings until Di's health took the recent downward turn. Most of the people there know I create music and write novels. A couple of them asked me when I knew I was finished with a novel or a song. I told them: "When I get sick and tired of rewriting it".
Heh. It's like the question of when an album is done - when you run out of money! laugh

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Anyway, I think you have a really good project to tinker with as you see fit. It doesn't need much - as little spit and polish here and there.
Thanks! I've made some minor tweaks, but I suspect a more drastic cutting on the harmonies is what's called for. But that's for some other time.

Thanks for stopping to listen and comment! smile

-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?