Hi, Marty.

Originally Posted by BabuMusic
Jazz-lite indeed. Hey, those lyrics you threw at it are perfect --AND have substance, David. The vocals are so well done. Man, you are so good at that intricate stuff.
Thanks! smile

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Know what you mean about being backed into a corner with lyrics. Glad you stuck with this. Hey, Hamilton will give you a precedence to quote to the rhyme police; they rhymed subject with subject four times in the same line.

Ha!

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Third listen now... The opening reminds me of Beatles. Dang, I can imagine writing all of those intricate harmony lines, and you say you cut back some. Haha. That's why I'm on my 3rd spin. This is totally brilliant, David.
I'm glad you liked it!

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Please don't rely on your kids to know what's good enough.
You misunderstand. My daughter was the one who told me to finish it up. Not her style at all, but it was worth finishing. She did like the change in rhythm in the chorus, though.

Thanks for listening and taking the time to comment!


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?