The vocal could be a tiny bit louder...you sounds as if you're in the warm embrace of the band for the choruses.
The counter melody harmony section is very cool. I THINK I'd have panned them a little further away from each other BUT as they are the harmonies combine in a rich sound that is ACE.
Impressive stuff Master Marty.


Cheers
rayc
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