Bob, that's a really great idea for a song, something that applies to everyone (well, except probably me, because there's no tape in my house except duct tape grin), and after some googling I found all your references too.
You create a nice nostalgic mood.

I'm not sure if having Joliz sing the whole song in unison is the best choice.
I think her either singing harmonies and/or only singing every other line to emphasize them would give her part more impact and create some contrast.

But I enjoyed my listen nonetheless , it's a really good song [Linked Image - Only viewable when logged in]