I like that.
A lot!
Cool lyrics, cool arrangement and production, and I really like your vocals and harmonies.
I would probably reconsider going down on the last 2 words in the chorus. It works perfectly in the verses, but I think going up at the end of the chorus would fit the upbeat nature of the song better.
It's a matter of personal taste of course, and the song works _really_ well as it is now, so I wouldn't lose too much sleep over my suggestion smile