I'm always amazed at your lyrics and the way you arrange the instruments.
This is a VERY cool song.
The only thing I would personally change (and what made mixing so difficult for you) is the first verse (and, to a lesser extent, the second).
I understand what you were trying to accomplish, but it's just too crowded, it sounds like one voice fighting with two pianos from two different songs.
Just making the vocals louder probably won't help, so I would use the piano without the delay(s) and leave only what you need to achieve the desired effect.
Perhaps simply panning the piano to the left and the delay to the right could also solve the problem.
Aside from this, your mix is actually very good and enjoyable
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