Hi Andrew,

You made a very nice song. The vocal harmonies are good.
Your vocals are good too (maybe a little more reverb?).

The song itself could use some variation in the build, like a transposition or so.
That can bring some more excitement in it.
But that's what I would do, others might disagree on that ;-)

Hans


Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130