Hi David,

I dunno how I missed this one. I don't think your lyrics are so toothless...but I am a little confused by this piece which probably won't suprise you given your own comments. I like the music and I like (most of) the harmonies. But I actually think it's the music that is toothless with your lyrics. Does that make sense? I like both...just not sure if together. But FWIW, I think you have two potentials here...like Mario said, 'diamonds in the rough'.