Hi, Noel.

Excellent opening:

Maybe tomorrow
This ocean will be blue... again.

It sets up the song and "attitude" immediately.

The vocals in the mix feels a bit distant to me, but that might be a "me" issue, because I prefer my vocals a bit more up front.

There are a few places were the /s/ is brought down a touch too much is "lisp" territory - but again, that's a preference thing.

I like it! Nice song, it tells the story well. I'm glad you were able to dust it off. smile

-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?